- have multiple voices, or at least one different voice reading the poems (otherwise I get the impression the poems don't stand out enough and it all sounds a bit samey).
- have more music maybe, to form transitions for the different sections/modules of the review?
- have sci-fi sound effects and fart noises. oh. and canned laughs, a laughtrack, of course.
- mix in voices from other sources, other recordings maybe. Jones had recorded some of his poetry, would have liked to mix that in.
- content wise? I think I was right to start with a poem. Start with something striking from the book. Something that does it justice. Sample the poetry a lot. Say little about my opinion, but let it in enough. So, maybe it could function as much as a sampler for the listener than a: this is what I think blah blah blah
- make it shorter
Republic of Yorkshire
Yorkshire is a Place, Yorkshire is a State of Mind — Howard Moon
Tuesday 1 September 2015
Skin — Chris Jones
My first attempt at a podcast has been up on Sabotage Reviews for a week or so now. It starts off dead-boring, but does get better, I promise. Sort of. Still not sure if I want to do more recorded reviews. I do like how much poetry you can cram into them. And listening, and reading the poems helped to form my opinion of the book a lot more than regular old reading with eyes alone. Quite a few things I could improve though:
Tuesday 17 February 2015
Rebecca Perry, Beauty/Beauty
Bloodaxe, 2015£9.95
tl;dr: If at times endearingly antiquated in its sentiments, Beauty/Beauty
is also doggedly the work of a millennial. Perry’s insistence on facing down and subverting familiar poetic subjects suggests a sensibility unlikely to rest on its laurels.
Like the artist John Stezaker, whose ‘Mask XXXV’ features on Beauty/Beauty’s cover, Rebecca Perry’s first collection is in close proximity to Surrealism. Akin to Stezaker’s “preoccupation with … the revelatory potential of the obsolete object and image” Perry’s sensibility seems consciously Victorian in its choice of subject matter. ‘A Little Dog Angel,’ ‘Love Apart,’ and ‘Forever Friends’ are not titles that occur in this book. Yet that species of sincerity—the kind of poetry enshrined on the servers of familyfriendpoems.com, most written, most read, and for the most part completely ignored by ‘proper’ poets—is the kind Perry can’t resist playing chicken with.
That Elizabeth Bishop was dismissed as cute, her choice of subject matter, and her miniaturist technique thought of as unworthy of the generation that spawned a gerrymandering giant like Lowell, seems pertinent to recall.
Poems like the tongue-in-cheek ‘The Pet Cemetery’ succeed in-so-far as they are brave enough to face down and subvert the familiar. Rather than mawkish, ‘The Pet Cemetery,’ in approaching the long list of Perry’s deceased fauna (she should have opted for the Siberian hamsters) with the same collage technique used elsewhere in the book, manages to short-circuit conventional assumptions of the poetic.
Fattie, my joy.
Ponto. See you on the other side.
We had twelve years together, Chips,
I will never forget.
My adorable Scum.
I.M.U., my relentless Casper.
My most magnificent Baron,
where have you gone?
(‘The Pet Cemetery,’ pg. 43)
The major criticism I can see being levelled at such plucky endeavours is that they can be seen as slight. Certainly, when the tour de force ‘Dear Stegosaurus’—Perry calls it “a love letter”—ends with the line “your mouth holds more wonder than a sky full of stars,” (even if the preceding line is exceedingly beautiful) you wonder if it hasn’t simply been an exercise in frivolity.
In what is perhaps an unintentional tribute to Stezaker “the dark spaces of subjectivity [in these poems] seem somehow blasted through, exposed and emptied out.”
That Elizabeth Bishop was dismissed as cute, her choice of subject matter, and her miniaturist technique thought of as unworthy of the generation that spawned a gerrymandering giant like Lowell, seems pertinent to recall. That Bishop herself fretted she had “wasted half [her] talent through timidity” and feared that her poems were “precious,” is hopefully not something Perry has to worry about.
The poems that play with space on the page (surely a fulfilment of the Glynn Maxwell prophecy) possess an assurance rarely found in the British tradition. (The spaced out among American poets, in the mainstream at least, include Gillian Conoley, Juan Delgado, and Helen Vitoria.) ‘On serendipity,’ ‘Over/wintering,’ and especially ‘Ergonomics’ hold the same quotidian-become-beautiful charm as Cummings and are equally difficult to resist.
I have a soft bread roll on my desk which two or three times
I’ve squeezed very gently when no one is looking
butter sprinkle of salt pea soup dream
the price of gold is falling I can’t see a window but the reflection
on the floor suggests intermittent sun
(‘Ergonomics,’ pg. 34)
In what is perhaps an unintentional tribute to Stezaker “the dark spaces of subjectivity [in these poems] seem somehow blasted through, exposed and emptied out.” The artist’s reflection on his use of sea cave postcards seems remarkably relevant.
If at times endearingly antiquated in its sentiments, Beauty/Beauty
is also doggedly the work of a millennial. It isn’t just the online IQ tests, Tetris blocks, and flashing trainers either, but that poems like ‘Wasp’ and ‘Poor Sasquatch,’ attest to an affection for the inanimate to the tune of Gary Snyder’s Mac: “Because plastic is a sad, strong material that is charming to rodents.”
The book
contains five collage-like poems. They’re tumblr poems, Pinterest poems, poems that know the cut and paste, the drag and drop of this century. Some of the sources for them are familiar, such as Pitman’s Short-hand Instructor, The Year You Were Born, 1986, or the unmistakable copy of junk mail. (The poems ‘Junk Mail’ and ‘The Year I Was Born’ are not linked to any specific text in the notes.)
Perry’s sensibility seems consciously Victorian in its choice of subject matter.
Others are more rarified, parts of a long poem by the avant-garde poet Anne Carson—for instance—are drafted in to make ‘A Most Satisfactory Dreamlife,’ and the literary detritus of Tennessee Williams shores up the familiarly titled ‘A prayer for the wild at heart kept in cages.’ (The quote is the subtitle of the little-know play ‘Stairs to the Roof,’ where it appears as ‘A Prayer for the Wild at Heart that are Kept in Cages.’)
Though I admit to being wary of the make-weight guff that comes out of workshops, the Williams mash-up contains beautiful lines, as does its Carson inspired relation.
Thursday 15 January 2015
Rebecca Perry — Beauty/Beauty (Interview)
So, Rebecca — is everything ready? Are you excited?
Everything is ready! For a while I just had a couple of
boxes of books in my front room and I felt a little detached from the whole
thing, then – are you ready for a terrible, half-baked simile – it was like
that moment in Sonic where he smashes open the capsule to free the woodland
creatures, and there’s a very brief screen-freeze, then the capsule blows up
and they all leap out and gambol around.
It was like that. The screen freeze was basically me walking past the
boxes in my front room for a couple of weeks, looking at them a little
distrustingly, then people started tweeting pictures of it and someone told me
they saw it in a bookshop, and suddenly it felt like it was out there.
(Sonic Simile)
Could you say a little about how you came to be publishing with Bloodaxe?
I was incredibly lucky. For years I’d hoped that when I
was ready for a book it would be with Bloodaxe – I’ve always admired the list
and, more specifically, their legacy of publishing women and writers of colour
where other poetry publishers were (and still are) failing to – so I sent my
manuscript to Neil and, after suggesting I work on it a little and add some
more poems, he accepted it. I’m very aware that I had a really easy run at the
whole thing!
Before talking about what's inside the book, it seems like the design — judging from the beautiful cover at least — is really important to you. Could you say a little about the process, about how much input you had in the design of the book?
The cover was very important to me, actually, and I was very grateful that I was allowed to have a say in it. I think someone else choosing it would have been tricky for me. I’ve thought a bit about why it was so important and I think it comes down to two things: the first is that art is very important to me, something I have a great love for, so I figured the cover may as well be a work of art. Also, because the collection doesn’t have a unifying theme, sense of place, or central image as such, I wanted an image that would sit beside it abstractly, something a little stranger.
The cover was very important to me, actually, and I was very grateful that I was allowed to have a say in it. I think someone else choosing it would have been tricky for me. I’ve thought a bit about why it was so important and I think it comes down to two things: the first is that art is very important to me, something I have a great love for, so I figured the cover may as well be a work of art. Also, because the collection doesn’t have a unifying theme, sense of place, or central image as such, I wanted an image that would sit beside it abstractly, something a little stranger.
The cover of Beauty/Beauty featuring 'Mask XXXV' by John Stezaker. |
I also enjoy that the cover is quite divisive – most
people love it but a few people have found it a little disconcerting, like ‘Oh!
That’s… unusual? Did you choose that?’
Now, in terms of the contents of the book, ROY made some predictions about poems that might have made it and there's a taster on the Bloodaxe website, but what can you tell us more about the poems in the new book? Where do they come from?
In the end very few poems from the pamphlet made it into the book and it felt a sort of relief to leave them behind. Not necessarily because of any great feelings of shame about the older poems but just because I wanted the book to be a new thing. Most of the poems didn’t make it because there was no way I’d have written them now, however many years on and that felt akin to being dishonest, somehow.
In the end very few poems from the pamphlet made it into the book and it felt a sort of relief to leave them behind. Not necessarily because of any great feelings of shame about the older poems but just because I wanted the book to be a new thing. Most of the poems didn’t make it because there was no way I’d have written them now, however many years on and that felt akin to being dishonest, somehow.
I find talking about my writing/articulating where it
comes from very difficult. I suppose when I first started out writing I was
certainly mostly reading male writers (Lorca, O’Hara and E E Cummings, who I
still love) and lyric poetry, but for the last few years my interest has
shifted and I’m interested in very different writing, mostly by women. So my
poems come from the experience of being female, certainly, and the experience
of love, and the terror of one day ceasing to be alive. A friend who helped
edit the manuscript had written and circled the note ‘DEATH’ on quite a lot of pages, which is…
notable.
What was the writing phase like from pamphlet to collection?
They were very separate things – it wasn’t a case of the
book developing from the pamphlet as such – and the book felt much more of a
process. When I was working on the earlier poems with the vague notion that
they might become a book, I was having my writing workshopped regularly and
spending a lot of time worrying about editing them, being sure they were
‘clear’, hoping people didn’t hate them. Once the book was taking shape and I
needed another 10 or 15 poems to make up the numbers, I wrote in a much more
solitary, and less inhibited, way. I showed the poems to almost no one and a
handful of them had only been read by one other person by the time the book published.
I much preferred that way of working.
What did you enjoy the most about preparing your manuscript?
Once I’d made the decision to divide the book into
sections it appealed more to my proclivity for micro-focusing. It was a much
less daunting process to approach each section as a mini book within a book. Prior
to that it had felt a bit unwieldy and overwhelming.
I was also finishing the writing during summer so I had
lots of weekends sitting in my local park or on my balcony in the sun, with a
pile of books and a jar of gherkins, which was lovely. I also had a couple of
people who really helped me work on the manuscript, so there were brilliant
evenings in the pub looking through the poems, deciding what to cut and what to
keep. The process was really made by some of my friends actually, being
relentlessly supportive and enthusiastic when I ceased to be.
Could you pick a poem to whet appetites?
This is for my friend, Laura, and was recently published
in an anthology of poems about female friendship, Best Friends Forever, edited by Amy Key and published by The Emma Press [the poem 'Soup Sister' will also appear in Beauty/Beauty, which is published on the 25th]:
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Soup Sister
And, of course,
And, of course,
it bothers me greatly that I can’t know
the quality of the light where you are.
How your each day pans out,
how the breeze lifts the dry leaves from the street
or how the street pulls away from the rain.
Last week I passed a tree
that was exactly you in tree form,
with a kind look and tiny sub-branches
like your delicate wrists.
Six years ago we were lying
in a dark front room on perpendicular sofas,
so hungover that our skin hurt to touch.
How did we always manage
to be heartbroken at the same time?
I could chop, de-seed and roast
a butternut squash for dinner
in the time it took you to shower.
Steam curtained the windows, whiting out
the rain, which hit the house sideways.
One of us, though I forget who, said
do you think women are treated like bowls
waiting to be filled with soup?
And the other one said, of course.
Now the world is too big,
and it’s sinking and rising
and stretching out its back bones.
The rivers are too wild,
the mountains are so so old
and it’s all laid out arrogantly between us.
My friend, how long do you stand
staring at the socks in your drawer
lined up neat as buns in a bakery,
losing track of time and your place in the world,
in the (custardy light of a) morning?
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Thanks from ROY and the little lizard to Rebecca Perry for responding to the suggestion of an interview at such a busy period. If you'd like t'see your work, or can think of someone else's, you'd like to see up on ROY then y'know what t'do.
Also this:
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Thanks from ROY and the little lizard to Rebecca Perry for responding to the suggestion of an interview at such a busy period. If you'd like t'see your work, or can think of someone else's, you'd like to see up on ROY then y'know what t'do.
Also this:
Saturday 3 January 2015
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