Showing posts with label Beeston Poets. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Beeston Poets. Show all posts

Wednesday, 26 March 2014

Arthur Scargill — Steve Ely


As posts go you’ll have to squint to see that last one, way back in the mud of May ’13, which is getting on for a year now. Which is probably why it’s a strain to remember much of what went on and why and where, why there has been such a long hiatus. Work, yes. And London. But that time seems, above all else, a good whole to leave behind; a skin to shed, back before I had my VISA and my flights, when moving on was less final. 

Somewhere in there though I happened to say a brief hello to Steve Ely again, after an initial meeting back when I posted about his fellow Yorkshire Arts Circus’s Writer Development Programme graduate Becky Cherriman

That second meeting was at the Forward Prize ceremony in London, in October, where I had the pleasure of meeting the lovely Mona Arshi and where Oswald’s Book of Hours was up for the Felix Dennis Best First Collection and ‘Compline: Coronation of the Virgin’ got read by an actor (a feature of the evening Katy Evans-Bush covers expertly). 

It must be gratifying for Steve that Oswald was recently nominated for a prize in the name of the poet he very much admires, Ted Hughes. A fact that’s fairly indisputable, “bet I'm the only nominee who's actually written a book about Hughes,” Steve gleefully wagers on his website. I wish him best of luck at the award ceremony taking place in London this Friday.

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‘Arthur Scargill’ is the first sonnet of a sequence entitled ‘Memorials of the Saints,’ which concludes Oswald’s Book of Hours, published by Smokestack Books in 2013.  



Arthur Scargill

The lowest of the low and low-paid,
the primary men; farmhands, quarrymen, colliers.
Crude men, of appetite and violence, mumblers,
white-knucklers, averters of eyes. Beasts of burden,
their lives lived out in the rhythm
of the Coal Board’s seasons: days and afters,
Henry Halls, neets reg. Larks orbiting the wheel
and the cold cage falling. Crushed torsoes under splintered 
chocks, amputations on the maingate rip,
blood-streaked phlegm hocked-up. Surface to the land
of cockaigne: egg and chips, beer and the bookies.
You brought them health and Palma de Mallorca,
Cortinas on the drive and kids in college,
reading Marx and Mao and The Wealth of Nations.



‘Here, here,’ rings out the gruff and immediate response to this sonnet in the recording, the politics and the sentiment meeting with approval. But don’t let that make you think this is a poem that shirks the responsibilities of poemhood. Chances are the audience knew they agreed with the politics of the voice before they heard the poem, but this is a poem of a rare muscular affirmation. 

I’ve heard complaints from older poets about my generation for their a-political existence. But even among the elders, politics in poems—at least overtly—isn’t practised widely. Yet this poem isn’t ashamed of its opinion; it sticks its heels in and grinds out its music. Not that it’s just a grim old thing, though parts of it are. It is harsh historical realism married to something sweeter, the Henry Halls, the lark, gloriously, “orbiting the wheel.” It reminds me, if anything, of a folksong in the line of Harry ‘Haywire Mac,’ one that manages to be sternly knowing and affectionate. 

Though the guts of it are grim, the blood in the phlegm, the crush, and the rip, you get the notion that this is because it's got guts. It's got “muscles and enjambments and eight and six,” “a waist and a middle—it is a form.” So as Heaney has it, as opposed to those sonnets “going the rounds in the United States,” this one packs an audible punch and holds true to poetry as “a muscular response,” (Schmidt, Lives of the Poets, 843, 1998) something Hughes would surely have approved of. 

And what impressed me the most initially, that echo, that response from the audience. The guttural grunt of affirmation, the agreement that this is a position to hold on to. I hope Steve soon receives further national and international recognition for hitting the nail on the head for the community he writes in. 

Wednesday, 1 May 2013

Mine - Becky Cherriman


“Mine,” says my two-year-old niece, plucking the green beanie off my head. “Mine,” she repeats as she slips it over hers, proving it to be hugely - hilariously - too big. “Mine,” she says again, informing me as to the true ownership of her giant inflatable rabbit. “Mine. Mine. Mine. Mine!” We adults smile knowingly at each other, “bless!” But if only we knew how many times we’d chanted the same thing. Hundreds of thousands? A million? And that’s only one generation. How many more back to the mi of Old Saxon, the mik of Old Norse or even the mam of Sanskrit?* And at what point do we convince others that the packet of Cadbury’s Chocolate Fingers really are mine, that the border of a country or a county is?

“Mine,” starts up the audience in a mesmeric hum. “Mine,” chants this huddled semi-circle in Nottingham who’ve come only to listen. But Becky Cherriman’s poem wants more from us than silent acknowledgement. It’s choral and quarrelsome, a poem unfashionably out of form (almost all the others we will hear will be written in one traditional form or another), a poem that insists we hear our own internal contradictions: that belonging to a place, coming from a place can never be a simple story, is always instead an inured ambivalence; I want to get away but stay put too. 

That contradiction is in the poem. At 44 lines and roughly 02:15 in performance (not including applause!), occassionally, opportunistically rhymed (l.1-A, l.3-A/, l.7-A, l.9-A-int/; l.30-B, l.31-B; l.44-C-int) relying heavily on a small repertoire of rhetorical techniques, (repetition, paromoiosis, brachylogia) the  poem shuttles between expansive romantic sentiment and direct no-nonsense statement; between waxing lyrical and shutting your trap (very Leeds). 

Take l.17 - l.22, within these five lines we’re circumscribed within what is thoroughly stratified diction, ‘the aria of the tide,’ ‘the opening of the lotus,’ ‘the weave and the weft,’ lucid dreams and yawning caves, we're stifling a yawn too, we've heard it all before. And yet the forward impetus of the repetition (‘Mine is …’) coupled with the sound parallelism (l.18 and l.20) incredibly makes, what would otherwise be pretty dull-dead stuff, come to life. Part of this is its mindfulness of performance; the poem wants to be read aloud.

And why not? It was born for it. Mythic but unpatronizing; allusive but down-to-earth, the poem keeps faith with the primary visceral texture of language. More neat parallelism being built into l.30 − 33, l.43 − 45 comes out in performance as so much savoured language, an appeal which rarely fails to do just that. 

Mahmoud Darwish
Though the poem insists on the right to political statement (being written after controversial Palestine poet Mahmoud Darwish), that the geopolitical divisions that exist the world over necessarily exist here too, its negotiation with performance and its eye and ear for how it will be received demonstrate a sincere wish for, as l.45 has it ‘new beginnings.’ One could do much worse than to make this their mantra.


*If we put one generation at a very approximate 25 years and trust Wikipedia about when Sanskrit first came to India and Pakistan, (in the second millenium BCE), then the sum is fairly straightforward. 4013/25 = 160.52 generations. Ask how many 'mines' or mine-like-utterances were repeated during those generations, multiply and - well - no wonder the word appeals. 


The event took place thanks to the Beeston Poets based in Beetson Library, Nottingham. Check out their up-coming events here. You can find Becky Cherriman at her website, and read her poems. You can listen to the live performance of 'Mine' at Beeston Poets too.


Mine 

1     I walked this land before
2     the moon was torn from the earth
3     in a gnashing of rock and magma.
4     I come from bones stripped bare
5     on an empty plain.
6     Born in a roar of lion cubs,
7     I had the mane of Sif and a legacy to fight for.

8     Mine is the forest and the herb
9     and the terra strata of vineyards.
10    Mine is the hills and the streams,
11    womb song and fire dance.
12    The golden apple is mine
13    and the bubbling stove.
14    Mine is the mangle and mine is the cradle.

15    Mine is the inheritance 
16    snatched by wolves.

17    The aria of the tide is mine.
18    and the opening of the lotus
19    Mine is the weave and the weft 
20    and the welcome interruption 
21    Mine is the lucid dream,
22    the history hidden in the yawning cave.
23    Mine is the holding place.

24    Mine is the inheritance 
25    snatched by wolves.

26    Mine is whalebone 
27    and plucked out toenails.
28    Mine is the stone and the razor, 
29    the red light and the wimple.
30    Mine is size zero and cellulite.
31    Mine is the soldiers in the night.
32    Mine is the girdle and the branding iron.
33    Mine is the language that clamps my tongue.

34    Mine is the inheritance 
35    snatched by wolves.

36    I have sent them away 
37    with torn ears and limping.
38    I learnt their stories only to rewrite them. 
39    I render the poison to the adder, 
40    the gold to Midas.
41    Mine is the ship on the horizon
42    where I net double rainbows like mussels. 

43    Make no mistake, 
44    I would raise the seas and drown the cities 
45    to forge a new beginning.



(Poem reproduced with permission of the author.)